Paragraph (With Errors)
The students worked hardly on their assignments, hoping to impress the teacher. They studied diligently, but sometimes they feels overwhelmed by the workload. Despite of this, they continue to strive for excellence.
Paragraph (Corrected)
The students worked hard on their assignments, hoping to impress the teacher. They studied diligently, but sometimes they feel overwhelmed by the workload. Despite this, they continue to strive for excellence.